It looks good. The only sugestion I would have would to add a bit of colour to it. As a father I know that a bit of colour in a book usually helps to attract the child to it. This is only my opinion. Anyway whatever you do I think that it is a great idea as I think that there is a lack of great material aimed at kids.
Illustrations look cool. The Papyrus font is awfully cliche.
Are there no end to your talents? Oh, you didn’t illustrate it? Nevermind (just kidding).
I have to agree with Judah, I don’t think the font is right for the project. It’s a children’s book, which means all of the text must be easy to read.
I like the illustration itself, though. Probably adding color will appeal to kids, but I love the stark black and white myself.
Woot! More Bible Manga!
I would definitely avoid papyrus. It’s the font everyone turns to when they want something Egyptian. Or middle eastern. Or Asian. Or midieval-fantasy inspired. Or old. Or leafy.. :)
The title font is nice and matches the cover, but is a little hard to read. The illustration looks good.
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